famomo

A direct continuation of Muscle Memory that was written for the fans of the first and distributed by the author. It picks up at the ending of the first book with the main character now stuck in his five month old infants body. When everybody looks to you to get things done, it can be a little hard to get their attention at first when all you can do is shake your little baby arms. But, once it is clear on who he is, then madcap adventures to fallow. Although, I thought it was a little tame this time around. The author still has a very clean and responsible writing style, but missing from this was all of the characterization and side stories that made the first as enjoyable. We get a straight forward escape, some clever dialog, and a couple quest appearances, but I never really though it moved forward or added anything to the overall story. The only thing that really stood out was how well he was able to write the descriptions of what it would be like to be trapped in a baby's body. Hopefully the author is not done with this because this felt like it was only the middle part of the story. And I'll be looking forward to reading the ending.

2022-11-14 18:51